If you want your Statement of Purpose or Personal Statement to be successful, you have to write it in such a way as to make those in charge of the selection process curious about you and to look forward to meeting you. You need to portray yourself in your statement as the kind of person that they want to have in their program. I am a practiced master at drafting your story in the best, most eloquent fashion possible, in the way that is most appealing to those who make the selection. I am so certain of my ability that I draft the first paragraph of your statement free of charge and at no further obligation.  If you really like the first paragraph that I produce, then I would then be honored to finish the statement on your behalf. 

Sample 1st 2 Paragraphs for the Doctoral Degree in Gerontology, Hispanic

Probably the weakest aspect of my application to your distinguished Doctoral Program in Gerontology at UXX is that many of my competitors will have higher GRE Scores than I do. It is my hope that you will select me nevertheless, however, primarily on the basis of the fact that I am originally from Honduras, bilingual, bicultural, and with a proven track record of concern for the elderly, especially those that are particularly vulnerable, abused, neglected, abandoned. Of course, I have a special interest in the welfare of elderly Latinos and look forward to excelling in this area, especially as a researcher during and after your program.

During my first year of high school, mature for my age and in search of a cause and a calling, my grandmother was diagnosed with Alzheimer’s and I watched her deteriorate quickly in front of my eyes. This gave me my crusade and since that time I have been working in my spare time, for years now, to learn all that I can about dementia. By the time that I graduate from your doctoral program at UXX, I fully intend to be capable of giving anyone who would ask me, for example, an extremely cogent, thoughtful, and multi-faceted answer to the complex question of why Hispanics are approximately 1.5 percent more likely than non-Hispanic whites to suffer from dementia.

Personal Statement Writing Service, Editing Help for Admission to Graduate School

I am here to help you with your Personal Statement of Purpose for admission to a program of advanced study, fellowship, scholarship, or residency position. My service takes anywhere from a few hours to several days, depending on how quickly you provide me with the information that I need. I am a creative writer for higher, fast and highly specialized (no templates used) and I produce an extremely high quality, model statement on your behalf and then work with you on the revision at no extra charge. Often, to the extent to which I have time, I am able to produce your first paragraph at no charge or obligation. Originally from the US, I have lived all over the world. Since I am now a resident of Bolivia, this enables me to maintain especially reasonable prices for my service.


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For everyone who provides me with adequate information, I carefully review it so as to produce what in my opinion would be a model first paragraph for your statement. The first paragraph is especially critical. Many experts suggest that applicants are generally accepted or rejected on the basis of the first paragraph alone. I do several of these a day; about half of these applicants decide to become paying customers so that I can finish the statement. Then, they often recommend me to their friends who are also going through the application process. This is how I support myself and my baby boy, laying something aside for his future. Let's get started working on your statement together, as a team, you and me. All you need to do is fill out my Online Interview Form and I will send you the first paragraph of your model statement. Many of my visitors are impressed with my ability and subsequently decide to use my service  (Testimony).

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For the past 15 years, I have helped many hundreds of applicants from all over the planet to get accepted into the world's finest English-speaking universities, graduate programs, fellowships, scholarships, internships, and residency positions. I provide our clients with uniquely creative, state-of-the-art statements of purpose, personal statements, and letters of motivation, intent, interest, goals, objectives and mission. I would also be happy to provide you with a new resume or CV or to revamp the one that you already have. Finally, I edit and enhance cover letters and letters of recommendation. In short, I am your one-stop shop for all of your paperwork needs: so you can focus on your march to success with full paperwork support.

I help as many people as I can free of charge, by drafting a model first paragraph on their behalf. In many if not most cases, I also offer to finish the document on their behalf at this price. I am limited in how many clients I am able to assist primarily by the fact that I have half custody of my baby boy Davy, every 24 hours he is mine for 24 hours, and he does not let me work unless he is asleep. This is also why it sometimes takes me a couple of days to finish your statement once you have made your payment. In short, I only offer to draft complete statements for people whose story excites me, people who I feel strongly are in a unique position to give something of importance to their respective professions. And I only do my best, taking the time to reflect on your story as well, usually doing some internet research on your behalf.

I help applicants to university and graduate school from all over the world. I would be honored to draft a model first paragraph for your Statement at no obligation in order to promote my service. Rapid Document Evaluation! I especially enjoy working on behalf of those clients whose stated long term goals represent a significant contribution to the progressive enrichment of humanity, particularly with respect to the Developing World, where I live with my only child Davy, and the cause to which I dedicated my life.

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An old wise man and creative writer,  I draft a model first paragraph for your Statement free of charge to promote my service:  Many of my clients Add Me as a Contact! on Skype. ID: DrRobertEdinger so that we can chat. Please note that I am not usually able to talk and I need your information in text form.

I work very hard on each statement that I produce because  I trust you as well to recommend me to your friends and colleagues if you are very pleased with your statement. 

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My service is quite different from other statement writing services on the Internet for several reasons. I am the little guy on the web, not a big business like most of my competitors. You deal directly with me. I answer all of your questions completely free of charge and I am solely responsible for producing a statement that you are very pleased with.

Sample 1st Paragraph, International Dentist from India

A dentist from India who is now a Canadian citizen, still only 30 years old, I am a woman who is full of energy and determination to rebuild her career in dentistry here in America, her new permanent home. Not just a home, however, I also think of America as a base for the practice of global dentistry. My heart is in dental missions and I profoundly hope to devote increasing amounts of my time in this area of dentistry, especially over the long term. Since shortly after coming to America 5 years ago, I have been working as a dental hygienist and constantly learning from the dentists in our practice. Dr. XXXX, my primary mentor, constantly encourages me to pursue my goal of becoming a DDS in North America. He is especially supportive of my foremost area of research interest and dedication where I hope to most distinguish myself professionally, in the design and implementation of non-surgical protocols for the systematic evaluation, diagnosis, and treatment of patients.